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Bakakim
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Joined: 24 Aug 2007
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story graveyard pg13 and up |
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Okay so, have you ever had an idea for a story, and you write down this idea and then you don't know what to do with it? or you write the first chapter or two, and then just forget the point of it in the first place? I myself have started many stories, some of them good, others...well lets just not go there. so here I was hoping to post the dead stories, maybe they might help anything writer with their own story.
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| Fri Aug 24, 2007 1:57 am |
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Bakakim
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She sat there letting her tears of blood slide down her face. She was alone, and for the time safe. she had been running all night trying to get away from the place she once called home. She now knew she could never go back there. He mother, Father...mostly all of her family was killed by the humans. they said they were in the name of their god to kill them. To rid the world of their Evil. She realest the rest of her unsheathed tears as she thought about the attack and just before it fogged her mind.
It had been the night of her family's ball, when her older sister would be finding her mate for life. not one for parties, the younger girl had went to her garden to get away from all the noise and from the other females. She was never really one to fit in. The elder women saw as being to young and naive, where the younger ones saw her as an outcast. to them she was like the car wreak you just couldn't look away from. they often called her ugly and other names like that. She told herself she didn't have to deal with that and went out to enjoy the moon light.
It was while sitting there that she met him, and said a pray to the goddess for sending him to her. he seemed to come out of the darkness like a dream. his hair was long and black like night but with flashes of white in it, making his hair seem like it held lighting. He was as tall as her father, if not taller reaching at lest a good 6'6. He seemed to be almost the perfect Vampire, like how she dreamed. he was dressed in a black tux, she could only guess it was one of the many suiters that came for her sister. she bowed her head towards him and then gave a sigh turning away. He was here for his sister, it was not good to get her hopes up thinking things like that.
"Princess why are you out there when they party is in there?" his voice was dark and rich, like coffee. It warmed her slightly in the cold of the night. she looked up to meet his red eyes that held a smile in them. It was rare for many Vampires in her court to have red eyes which caused to be drawn to him even more.
"I'm not one for a party. I love dancing, but not one for the crowds....sir..." She stopped herself seeing that she didn't know this man. He no doubt knew who she was. or at lest knew she was one of the princesses. But how? had he came to another ball that her family held? and if so how come she never saw him before? And also it's not like she looked like her other sisters, being the youngest almost meant being the odd one out.
unlike her sister who all had long lovely red hair, he hair was a light and dark brown mixed with some red and blond, making her look more human then them. She was also sightly shorter then them, only being a small 5'4 where as the rest of her sisters, where all almost a good six feet. the only thing that made her like the rest of them was her eyes, or at lest one of them. Her one eye was blue like the rest of her siblings, where the other one was purple with flakes of green. which just gave her people another reason to cast her out.
The man at sat next to her giving her a toothy grin. He reached out his hand and took her to shake.
"My name is Conchobhar*...but for you princess Caillech Fand* you can call me Connor."
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*Conchobhar — (KON-kho-var or KROO-ar) derived from cu "hound, wolf" + cobar "desiring" = "wolf-lover" or "lover of hounds"; "high will, desire".
*Fand — a goddess of healing and pleasure in Ireland and Isle of Man, who married the sea god Manannan mac Lir.
*Caillech — (CALL-yach or KEE-lek) goddess known as the Veiled One; teacher of the arts of war and viewed as a Destroyer aspect of the Goddess.
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| Fri Aug 24, 2007 2:02 am |
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frostbite02
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Joined: 15 Aug 2007 Age: 20
Posts: 546 Location: Artic Circle
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lol I remember this one, I likes it, just needs a little editing and what not, but otherwise I like this one
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